Writing: Appositives (2010.04.07)

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Post your fifty sentences with appositives.

This is the pattern:

[Someone] , [this kind of person] , [does/did something.]

[Grant Lee]

1.Jacob, who is really stupid, jumped of a cliff.
2.Michael, who is a basketball player, plays basketball.
3.Ethan, who is short, has a hard time shooting baskets.
4.Joshua, who is very religious, goes to church all the time.
5.Daniel, who is not religious, never goes to church.
6.Alexander, who is a great general,made great battle plans.
7.Anthony, who is a criminal, did many crimes.
8.William, who killed many people, will be going to jail.
9.Christopher, who was an explorer, explored great places.
10.Matthew, who made history, has become a beggar.
11.Emma, who is smart, will be going to Brown.
12.Isabella, who is stupid, is a straight F student.
13.Emily, who comes from England, has a strong accent.
14.Madison, who is lackadaisical, learns nothing the teacher says.
15.Ava, who loves to eat, eats ad nauseum.
16.Olivia, who is a quitter, quit school after she got bad grades.
17.Sophia, who loves soap, accidentally ate soap.
18.Abigail, who reads a lot, read Sphere in two days.
19.Elizabeth, who is the queen, wears expensive clothes.
20.Chloe, who made ice cream, eats chocolate than ice cream.
21.Kevin, who plays that cello, can read and play music.
22.Donald, who is a duck, has a funny accent.
23.Kenneth, who plays sports, loves to play hockey.
24.Jessica, who swims, wants to grow up to be a swimmer.
25.Susan, who can swim, is prepared for a meet.
26.Timothy, who plays golf, respects Tiger Woods as an idol.
27.Jason, who is funny, that he was invited to comedy central.
28.Ronald, who likes Macdonald's, goes there everyday.
29.Lisa, who is fat, sat on her cat and killed her cat.
30.Jeffery, who has the brains, loves raisins.
31.Karen, who teaches, enjoys her job as a teacher.
32.Sarah, who is happy, jumped up and down happily.
33.George,who is curious, touched everything.
34.Edward, who is psycho, jumped off a cliff.
35.Nancy, who loves mystery, helped Sherlock Holmes.
36.Ryan, who can read, read Green eggs and ham.
37.Eric, who can jump, jumped a crack.
38.Gary, who is slow, lost a race to a car.
39.Ashley, who loves ashes, burned her whole house and family.
40.Douglas, who loves grass, jumped on to grass and cracked glass.
41.Katherine, who loves carrots, lost her 20 karat tooth eating a carrot.
42.Aaron, who is fond of ponds, jumped in to a pond.
43.Adam, who jumped down a fathom, loved the pressure.
44.Julie, who loves jewels, ate jelly.
45.Anna, who loves bananas,wore bandannas.
46.Zachary, who hates celery,
47.Jose, who loves Bose speakers, threw away the Sony speakers.
48.Steven, who is even, will go to heaven.
49.Paul, who like to call, does not like to fall.
50.James, who aims at lame people, has no fame.

[Jeny Kwon]

1. Andrea , who is a very good friend, helped in with my reading homework.
2. Julia, who is really smart, got all the questions right on the math test.
3. Mrs. Lee, who is a nice teacher, teaches me reading and writing.
4. Jessica, who is my third grade friend, is going to visit me today.
5. Lucy, who is a very crazy girl, danced in front of the teachers.
6. Micheal, who is a stupid student, got all the questions wrong.
7. Michelle, who was my best friend, moved to korea last year.
8. Kelly, who is a very tall girl, likes to play basketball.
9. Esther, who is a very good pianist, played a concert last week.
10. Sally, who has bad memory, forgot to do her math homework.
11. Kelsy, who is the best dancer in our class, got the place for our cheerleading captian.
12. Jun, who was in our math class, went to the pre-algebra class for a higher level.
13. Ryan, who is very weird, got problems with some students.
14. Ken, who is extremely shy, couldn't do the presentation in front of the class.
15. Mr. Friesen, who was a teacher, got fired.
16. My mom, who is ultra nice, is a very good cooker.
17. Mr. Uribe, who is really strict, is my math and science teacher.
18. Zachry, who likes to play, plays all night.
19. Mathew, who likes to read, read twenty books a month.
20. Tim, who does not know how to write, failed second grade.
21. Julienne, who is very strong, did fifty push-ups in third grade.
22. Louis, who is a very popular girl, moved to texas after winter break.
23. Lucky, who is my dog, is really small.
24. Jason, who is very tall, is a really good basketball player.
25. Diana, who sings all day, won a singing contest.
26. Nicole, who likes to jump a rope, jumps hundred times a day.
27. Lina, who is an expert on writing, gets full points for every writing assigment
28. Simon, who likes to play sports, has an A+ in P.E.
29. Daniel, who likes to bragg about himself, tells everyone that he is an expert on the guitar.
30. Judy, who is a very nice girl, thinks Kelly can't speak english.
31. Jessica, who is an A+ student, got a A- for the first time.
32. Asia, who is really rich, always wears a different outfit.
33. Ellie, who has a pool in her house, has a pool party every year.
34. Julia, who lives in a small house, can't invite her friends to her house.
35. Bora, who is in sixth grade, thinks she is the best on piano.
36. Kelsy, who is really skinny, wears shorts although it is cold.
37. Bona, who is fat, wears dresses all the time.
38. Jessy, who eats a lot, doesn't share her cookies with her friends.
39. Katelyn, who is my new friend, doesn't speak in english,
40. Grace, who is a very playful perosn, is going to do a pool party for her birth day.
41. Kasidy, who is in second grade, is the daughter of my language arts teacher.
42. Jody, who was quiet, became really loud in her sleep over.
43. Ellen, who is crazy, likes to joke around with his friends.
44. Brandon, who is in my firend's class, likes to eat sweets.
45. Gene, who is Brandon's brother, hates sweets.
46. Jennifer, who likes to go out with her friends, gets to her house late.
47. Justin, who is extremely rich, has two BMWs.
48. Simon, who has an eccentric personality, shouts at a bird.
49. Rachel, who is an expert on piano, plays piano two hours a day.
50. Andrew, who is a lonely boy, doesn't have any friends.

[Jeffrey Pak]

Appositive Sentences:
1. My dad, who is tall, runs an electronic store.
2. Soup, which is a delicious liquid, is usually oily.
3. Fred, who is fat, has very chubby hands.
4. Rudolph, who is a reindeer, has a red nose.
5. The chair, which has 4 legs, is made out of wood.
6. Bob, who is building a sand castle on the shore of the beach, got pinched by a sand crab.
7. Gregory, who hates reading books, was forced to read captions of his TV shows by his mom.
8. The police car, which is solar powered, stops running at sundown.
9. President Obama, who is the new and famous president of the United States of America, is giving a speech right now.
10. This paper, which has a lot of ink formed into symbols that represent something, has fifty sentences upon it.
11. This number, which is often called eleven, represents the eleventh sentence on this paper.
12. The book I am reading for my science book report, which is called “In War Times”, is very complex and boring because it is about DNA and it also has a lot of corrupt words in it.
13. This sentence, which is the thirteenth one on this paper, should not be read for a life and death reason.
14. The computer I am working on, which is a laptop, has Windows XP.
15. Linus, who is my school friend, is a complete nerd.
16. Jeffrey, who is working on his Vocabulitis homework, types his sixteenth sentence.
17. Unlike Barney, who is dead, Elmo is a murderer.
18. Unlike old people, who are everywhere, most young people hate middle aged people.
19. Just like my friend’s dog, who poops everywhere, these numbers always have dots right behind them.
20. This homework, which is just like Spanish, is boring.
21. The sentence, which is numbered 21, is idiotic.
22. The gray bookmark, which was red, was sat on.
23. Eugene, who is my best friend, loves to play war games.
24. The cat, who ate a mouse, got hit by a truck.
25. Jeffrey, who is typing away on his computer, just realized that the computer was muted.
26. Bob the builder, who is an idiot, fell off the roof of a fifteen story building.
27. Jeffrey, who is trying to type 28 more sentences, is not succeeding yet.
28. This sentence, which is numbered 28, is appositive.
29. The water, which is in the bottle, evaporated because the lid wasn’t on.
30. The electric bill, which was $50,000, was expensive because the TV antennae was on the whole month.
31. The terrifying word, which was called box, made the hobo daydream.
32. The grandma down the street, who’s name was Haglite, was a hag.
33. Down at the beach, which was called Safer Surfer Beach, was overrun by a swarm of snakes.
34. Scott, who was the weird kid in school, wondered out loud why the number nine hundred seventy-three quadrillion eight hundred thirty-one trillion four hundred sixty-seven billion two hundred eighty-nine million five hundred thirty-four thousand nine hundred sixty two was called nine hundred seventy-three quadrillion eight hundred thirty-one trillion four hundred sixty-seven billion two hundred eighty-nine million five hundred thirty-four thousand nine hundred sixty two.
35. Scott, who was the weird kid in school, had asked the teacher how electric blankets worked—in the middle of history class!
36. Jared, who was an idiot in school, caught us dumbfounded when he asked why sandwiches were called sandwiches.
37. Joseph, who had buck teeth, could open a pickle jar in a flash.
38. Bob, who was the fat guy in McDonalds, was bigger than my car.
39. I prefer beef, which is cow, over pork.
40. Beer, which is a brew thing, is a bad way to treat loneliness.
41. Just like beer, which is a brew thing, cider is bad for you.
42. Adolf Hitler, who was the leader of the Nazis, took control of Germany like it was nothing.
43. Judgment Day, which is a book, is about the end of the world.
44. The movie 2010, which is a boring movie, is also about the end of the world.
45. Bananas, which are curved yellow fruit, are delicious.
46. Dragons, which are mystical creatures, could destroy the whole population of the Earth in no time.
47. Asking questions, which is a very good path to knowledge, is something I do almost never.
48. Jeffrey, who is almost done with the homework assignment, is very happy about that.
49. Light, which is the fastest thing in the world, can go up to 186,300 miles per hour.
50. Fast food, which is the worst thing in the world, tastes awesome.

[Jihyun Kim]

1.My brother, drawing his family, having fun.
2.My brother, playing with his friends, forgot to eat lunch.
3.Obama, The President of United States, is eloquent speaker.
4.Mrs.Chang, who is beautiful my English teacher, is erudite.
5.Dr.Norman, who is main character in the story "Sphere", is psychologist.
6.Mr.Ted, who is most smartes character in the story "Sphere", haping them to figure out about the spacecreft.
7.Napoleon, who is ruler and tried to rule the animal in the story "Anlmal Farm", is failure.
8.Benjamin, watched them and did not take part in in the story "Animal Farm", is not participant.
9.Justin Bieber, who is famous and young, is singer in the America.
10.Jisoo, going to the Washington D.C, is excited, and expect.
11.Jennifer, finding the words from dictonary, using that words on her essay.
12.Jennifer, who class president of our class, would working hard for our class.
13.Mr.K, who is smartest my English teacher on Monday and Wednesday, would be Mrs.Chang's brother.
14.Mr.K, teaching us English with sometime funny storys, is funnier than grammar.
15.Mrs.Weber, who is Art class teacher in the Fullerton Union High School, teaching Spanish class too.
16.My friend, going to library with me, forgot to bring her homeworks.
17.My best friend, confiding in me her secrets, is trust me.
18.Shower window, it is can not throught to see, is opaque.
19.My dog, chewing my all homeworks, would get stomachache.
20.Rose, showing her beautiful red elegant color, also having a passion in her color.
21.Levy, cooking up a bunch for dinner, likes cooking for his family.
22.The sun, trying to close with moon, couldn't be close with moon.
23.My brother, calling to his father using cell phone, trying to say something to father.
24.My pencil case, hugging with my pencil and eraser, would likes my pencil and eraser.
25.My friend, going to the beach with her friends, forgot to bring her suncream.
26.Harry, who went to the sphere in some hours, couldn't remember all happens.
27.Harry who hates squid though likes shrimps, couldn't eat any squid at the dinner.
28.Ted, who want to solve the cryptic number of message, getting interesing on it.
29.Jessica, who made some lemonade with cookies for garage sale, ate everything because she was hungry.
30.Su Kang, who is one of my best friend, met me at the St.Thomas church.
31.Jessica, studying in her room for math exam, forgot to eat lunch.
32.My brother, singing a song and dancing with me, turining around and around and around.
33.Jihyun, having superficial knowledge of grammar, studying grammar and vocabulary too.
34.Beethoven, who is famous composer of classical music, is lose his hearing.
35.Albert Einstein, who is the troublemaker when he was young, is invented a lot of things.
36.Jihyun, Finished reading a book "Sphere", is content and doing her homework.
37.Beyonce, who is one of the famous and beautiful singer in the America, singing a song by harmonious sounds.
38.Jessica, who is cheerleader of the Fullerton middle scool, is haughty cheerleader.
39.Johnson, broken his arm because he falldown on the tree, wearing a cast on his arm.
40.Teddy bear, it sense of touch is all soft, would be my friend on the bed.
41.Maria, who is a basketball player, made 17 points out of the 21 points.
42.Emma, who is very gererous nun in the church, prayed a lot for many people.
43.Kevin, who is famous doctor in the Fullerton Orange County, diagnosed a lot of poor patients for free.
44.Raphaela, who is one of the an archangel, stayed side of the God.
45.Su Kang, who is very nice and cool, just got intersting in facebook.
46.Diana, who is my friend in Fullerton High School, played basketball with me every times.
47.Phuong, who is very cool and pretty person in my biology class,was my same P.E class last semester.
48.Phong. who is flipino but born in America,likes Korean songs.
49.Johnson, who is very nice teacher, is my new English teacher in my English class.
50.Shawn, is very cute chinchla, is living in my Spanish teacher's house.

[Grant Lee]

1.Jacob, a boy, jumped of a cliff.
2.Michael, a basketball player, is tall.
3.Ethan, a nerd, reads all the time.
4.Joshua, a religious man, goes to church all the time.
5.Daniel, an nonreligious man, never goes to church.
6.Alexander,a great general,made great battle plans.
7.Anthony, a criminal, did many crimes.
8.William,a murderer, will be going to jail.
9.Christopher,an explorer, explored great places.
10.Matthew, a man that made history, has become a beggar.
11.Emma,a scholar, will be going to Brown.
12.Isabella,an f student, is a straight F student.
13.Emily, a girl from England,has a strong accent.
14.Madison, a lackadaisical girl, learns nothing the teacher says.
15.Ava, a girl who is a glutton, eats ad nauseum.
16.Olivia,a quitter, quit school after she got bad grades.
17.Sophia, a girl who loves soap, accidentally ate soap.
18.Abigail, a girl that reads a lot, read Sphere in two days.
19.Elizabeth,the queen, wears expensive clothes.
20.Chloe, the maker of ice cream, eats chocolate than ice cream.
21.Kevin, a boy plays the cello, can read and play music.
22.Donald, a duck, has a funny accent.
23.Kenneth, a boy who plays sports, loves to play hockey.
24.Jessica, a boy who swims, wants to grow up to be a swimmer.
25.Susan, a girl who can swim, is prepared for a meet.
26.Timothy, a boy who plays golf, respects Tiger Woods as an idol.
27.Jason, a boy who is funny, that he was invited to comedy central.
28.Ronald, a boy who likes Macdonald's, goes there everyday.
29.Lisa, a girl who is fat, sat on her cat and killed her cat.
30.Jeffery, a boy who has the brains, loves raisins.
31.Karen, a girl who teaches, enjoys her job as a teacher.
32.Sarah, a girl who is happy, jumped up and down happily.
33.George, a boy who is curious, touched everything.
34.Edward, a psycho, jumped off a cliff.
35.Nancy, a girl who loves mystery, helped Sherlock Holmes.
36.Ryan, a boy who can read, read Green eggs and ham.
37.Eric, a boy who can jump, jumped a crack.
38.Gary, a boy who is slow, lost a race to a car.
39.Ashley, a girl who loves ashes, burned her whole house and family.
40.Douglas, a boy who loves grass, jumped on to grass and cracked glass.
41.Katherine, a girl who loves carrots, lost her 20 karat tooth eating a carrot.
42.Aaron, a boy who is fond of ponds, jumped in to a pond.
43.Adam, a boy who jumped down a fathom, loved the pressure.
44.Julie, a girl who loves jewels, ate jelly.
45.Anna, a boy who loves bananas,wore bandannas.
46.Zachary, a boy who hates celery,
47.Jose, a boy who loves Bose speakers, threw away the Sony speakers.
48.Steven, a boy who is even, will go to heaven.
49.Paul, a boy who like to call, does not like to fall.
50.James, a boy who aims at lame people, has no fame.

[Audrey Lyu]

1. Jack, a scary man, is not good with children.
2. Mary, a very small girl, loves to run.
3. Peppero, a very yummy treat, has three different flavors.
4. Julie, whose birthday is in the month of July, wanted a birthday party.
5. Raccoons, the very pesky animals, love to dig out food in the garbage.
6. Mr. Patrick, the tallest teacher in class, plays the piano.
7. Yellow, a very bright color, symbolizes love.
8. John, Ricky's friend, cannot whistle.
9. Yolanda, the absent girl, is sick today.
10. Mr. Bunny, the pet of Harriet, is a very gentle creature.
11. Honey, a very sweet food, goes well with toast.
12. Mike, the short student in the class, loves to draw.
13. Cherries, which are very tasty, have pits in them.
14. Rick, a very smart boy, loves to read books.
15. Waldo, a character in a well-known book, is usually hard to spot.
16. Monkeys, very intelligent creatures, love to eat bananas.
17. Chuck, the shy one, is very silent and calm.
18. Hilary, a nice and friendly girl, loves to talk.
19. Cats, very stealthy creatures, have long tails.
20. Chickens, very tender when cooked, are perfect for Christmas meals.
21. George, an antisocial person, stays home a lot.
22. Phil, my next-door neighbor, cannot keep a secret.
23. Haruko, my Japanese friend, can speak both Japanese and English.
24. Camels, animals that are good for travel, can spend hours without water.
25. Dogs, very loyal and sweet animals, love to be praised by their owner.
26. Landon, the only boy in his family, loves to play baseball.
27. Jill, a helpful person, loves to give lectures to fellow classmates.
28. Jacob, the only student without a cell phone, wants one really badly.
29. Tommy, the youngest boy in 4th grade, is actually seven years old.
30. Flamingos, very beautiful birds to look at, get their pink color from what they eat.
31. T-shirts, one of my most favored clothing, is a comfortable top.
32. Polly, a very wealthy girl, is very thrifty.
33. Penguins, the birds that have black and white feathers, are good swimmers.
34. Candy, the sugary and sweet-tasting treats, can give you cavities.
35. Ramen, a very spicy food, can give you cancer.
36. Bill, a very wealthy businessman, is the father of Polly.
37. Eugene, a boy proned with ADD, is a very wise thinker.
38. Mr. Harrison, my music teacher, can be very strict.
39. Willy, the class-clown, is very sad.
40. Horses, which are very strong, are known for running.
41. Cars, which are good for distant traveling, are also known for speed and appearance.
42. Elephants, the gigantic creatures that roam in places like Africa, are scared of stepping on smaller animals.
43. Selena, the obese child, started exercising one week ago.
44. Turtles, the hard-shelled animals, hibernate in the winter.
45. My mom, a math tutor, gives me algebra homework.
46. My dad, the smartest man in the family, can be very silly sometimes.
47. Teddy, my 1st dog, is a Yorkshire Terrier.
48. Whiskers, a very mean cat, was de-clawed.
49. Magellan, a very famous explorer, died in the middle of the journey.
50. Uncle Bruce, my teacher, made his students write 50 appositive sentences for homework.

[Jihyun Kim]

Apr 12, 2010 20:41:40 GMT -8 @Jihyun Kim said:

1.My brother, drawing his family, having fun.
2.My brother, playing with his friends, forgot to eat lunch.
3.Obama, The President of United States, is eloquent speaker.
4.Mrs.Chang, who is beautiful my English teacher, is erudite.
5.Dr.Norman, who is main character in the story "Sphere", is psychologist.
6.Mr.Ted, who is most smartes character in the story "Sphere", haping them to figure out about the spacecreft.
7.Napoleon, who is ruler and tried to rule the animal in the story "Anlmal Farm", is failure.
8.Benjamin, watched them and did not take part in in the story "Animal Farm", is not participant.
9.Justin Bieber, who is famous and young, is singer in the America.
10.Jisoo, going to the Washington D.C, is excited, and expect.
11.Jennifer, finding the words from dictonary, using that words on her essay.
12.Jennifer, who class president of our class, would working hard for our class.
13.Mr.K, who is smartest my English teacher on Monday and Wednesday, would be Mrs.Chang's brother.
14.Mr.K, teaching us English with sometime funny storys, is funnier than grammar.
15.Mrs.Weber, who is Art class teacher in the Fullerton Union High School, teaching Spanish class too.
16.My friend, going to library with me, forgot to bring her homeworks.
17.My best friend, confiding in me her secrets, is trust me.
18.Shower window, it is can not throught to see, is opaque.
19.My dog, chewing my all homeworks, would get stomachache.
20.Rose, showing her beautiful red elegant color, also having a passion in her color.
21.Levy, cooking up a bunch for dinner, likes cooking for his family.
22.The sun, trying to close with moon, couldn't be close with moon.
23.My brother, calling to his father using cell phone, trying to say something to father.
24.My pencil case, hugging with my pencil and eraser, would likes my pencil and eraser.
25.My friend, going to the beach with her friends, forgot to bring her suncream.
26.Harry, who went to the sphere in some hours, couldn't remember all happens.
27.Harry who hates squid though likes shrimps, couldn't eat any squid at the dinner.
28.Ted, who want to solve the cryptic number of message, getting interesing on it.
29.Jessica, who made some lemonade with cookies for garage sale, ate everything because she was hungry.
30.Su Kang, who is one of my best friend, met me at the St.Thomas church.
31.Jessica, studying in her room for math exam, forgot to eat lunch.
32.My brother, singing a song and dancing with me, turining around and around and around.
33.Jihyun, having superficial knowledge of grammar, studying grammar and vocabulary too.
34.Beethoven, who is famous composer of classical music, is lose his hearing.
35.Albert Einstein, who is the troublemaker when he was young, is invented a lot of things.
36.Jihyun, Finished reading a book "Sphere", is content and doing her homework.
37.Beyonce, who is one of the famous and beautiful singer in the America, singing a song by harmonious sounds.
38.Jessica, who is cheerleader of the Fullerton middle scool, is haughty cheerleader.
39.Johnson, broken his arm because he falldown on the tree, wearing a cast on his arm.
40.Teddy bear, it sense of touch is all soft, would be my friend on the bed.
41.Maria, who is a basketball player, made 17 points out of the 21 points.
42.Emma, who is very gererous nun in the church, prayed a lot for many people.
43.Kevin, who is famous doctor in the Fullerton Orange County, diagnosed a lot of poor patients for free.
44.Raphaela, who is one of the an archangel, stayed side of the God.
45.Su Kang, who is very nice and cool, just got intersting in facebook.
46.Diana, who is my friend in Fullerton High School, played basketball with me every times.
47.Phuong, who is very cool and pretty person in my biology class,was my same P.E class last semester.
48.Phong. who is flipino but born in America,likes Korean songs.
49.Johnson, who is very nice teacher, is my new English teacher in my English class.
50.Shawn, is very cute chinchla, is living in my Spanish teacher's house.

-Fixed it-
1.My brother, very cute dude, is loves me.
2.My brother, the smartest student in his class, is also tallest student too.
3.Obama, The President of United States, is eloquent speaker.
4.Mrs.Chang, beautiful my English teacher, is erudite.
5.Dr.Norman, main character in the story "Sphere", is psychologist.
6.Mr.Ted, most smartes character in the story "Sphere", halping them to figure out about the spacecreft.
7.Napoleon, a ruler and he tried to rule the animal in the story "Anlmal Farm", is failure.
8.Benjamin, is third person in the story "Animal Farm" because watched them and did not take part in, is not participant.
9.Justin Bieber, a famous and young musicion, is also a singer in the America.
10.Jisoo, going to the Washington D.C, is excited, and expect.
11.Jennifer, is high school student and she is finding the words from dictonary, using that words on her essay.
12.Jennifer, a class president of our class, would working hard for our class.
13.Mr.K, smartest my English teacher on Monday and Wednesday, would be Mrs.Chang's brother.
14.Mr.K, a funny teacher from ustream and skype, is funnier than grammar.
15.Mrs.Weber, Art class teacher in the Fuullerton Union High School, teaching Spanish class too.
16.My friend, a smartest student and cool dude, forgot to bring her homeworks.
17.My best friend, Robbert's friend ; she is confiding in me her secrets, is trust me.
18.Shower window, can not throught to see, is opaque.
19.My dog, a cute dog in my family, is eatting my own homework.
20.Rose, a elegant and beautiful flower, also having a passion in her color.
21.Levy, a good person, who is cooking up a bunch for dinner, likes cooking for his family.
22.The sun, a very bright on the sky, couldn't be close with moon.
23.My brother, a mischivous boy who is calling to his father using cell phone, trying to say something to father about me.
24.My pencil case, a thin and blue and it is hugging with my pencil and eraser, would likes my pencil and eraser.
25.My friend, a picky boy who is going to the beach with her friends, forgot to bring her suncream.
26.Harry, really generous man who went to the sphere in some hours, couldn't remember all happens.
27.Harry, healthy and very erudite guy who hates squid though likes shrimps, couldn't eat any squid at the dinner.
28.Ted, tallest man in the group who want to solve the cryptic number of message, getting interesing on it.
29.Jessica, a Jasmine's friend who made some lemonade with cookies for garage sale, ate everything because she was hungry.
30.Su Kang, one of my best friend, met me at the St.Thomas church.
31.Jessi, same table with me in the art class, forgot to eat lunch.
32.My brother, antagonistic boy, turining around and around and around.
33.Jihyun, one of student is having superficial knowledge of grammar, studying grammar and vocabulary too.
34.Beethoven, famous composer of classical music, is lose his hearing.
35.Albert Einstein, the troublemaker when he was young, is invented a lot of things.
36.Jihyun,scrupulous student who is Finished reading a book "Sphere", is content and doing her homework.
37.Beyonce, one of the famous and beautiful singer in the America, singing a song by harmonious sounds.
38.Jessica, cheerleader of the Fullerton middle scool, is haughty cheerleader.
39.Johnson, one of hypocritical church member, loves his church.
40.Teddy bear, soft, big and cute doll on my bed, would be my friend on the bed.
41.Maria, a basketball player, made 17 points out of the 21 points.
42.Emma, very gererous nun in the church, prayed a lot for many people.
43.Kevin, famous doctor in the Fullerton Orange County, diagnosed a lot of poor patients for free.
44.Raphaela, one of the an archangel, stayed side of the God.
45.Su Kang, very nice and cool, just got intersting in facebook.
46.Diana, my friend in Fullerton High School, played basketball with me every times.
47.Phuong, very cool and pretty person in my biology class,was my same P.E class last semester.
48.Phong. flipino but born in America,likes Korean songs.
49.Johnson, very nice teacher, is my new English teacher in my English class.
50.Shawn, very cute chinchla, is living in my Spanish teacher's house.

[Audrey Lyu]

Appositives : final draft

1. Jack, the man with the scary face and is clothed with dark clothes, is not good with children.
2. Mary, a very petite girl with very large feet, loves to run.
3. Peppero, a very delicious treat that is enjoyed by most children, has three different flavors.
4. Julie, the fourteen-year-old girl that will turn fifteen in July, wanted a birthday party.
5. Raccoons, the very pesky animals that look like burglars, love to dig out food in the garbage.
6. Mr. Patrick, the tallest teacher in the entire school, plays the piano.
7. Yellow, a very bright and flashy color that is categorized in the warmer area of the color wheel, symbolizes love.
8. John, the best-friend of Ricky since they were in preschool, cannot whistle.
9. Yolanda, the only girl that was absent in school, is sick today.
10. Mr. Bunny, the cuddly and adorable pet of Harriet, is a very gentle creature.
11. Honey, a very sweet and sticky food that was made naturally by honey bees, goes well with toast.
12. Mike, the shortest 5th-grade student in the classroom, loves to draw.
13. Cherries, the succulent and red-colored treat that is very sweet, have pits in them.
14. Rick, a very intelligent boy with the highest grades in the school, loves to read books.
15. Waldo, a character in a extremely well-known book called "Where's Waldo?", is usually hard to spot.
16. Monkeys, the very intelligent creatures that come from the same family as humans, love to eat bananas.
17. Chuck, the shy one that is called names very frequently, is very silent and calm.
18. Hilary, a nice and friendly girl that has a numerous number of friends, loves to talk.
19. Cats, the very stealthy creatures are very quiet and still, have long tails.
20. Chickens, the ones that are very tender when cooked, are perfect for Christmas meals.
21. George, an antisocial person who feels that everybody but him is an idiot, stays home a lot.
22. Phil, my next-door neighbor that is not popular in school, cannot keep a secret.
23. Haruko, my Japanese friend that used to live in California but moved, can speak both Japanese and English.
24. Camels, the animals that are good for traveling in desert areas, can spend hours without water.
25. Dogs, the very loyal and sweet animals that are also known as "Man's best friend", love to be praised by their owner.
26. Landon, the only boy in his family, the Wongs, loves to play baseball.
27. Jill, a helpful person that is very well-known around the school campus, loves to give lectures to fellow classmates.
28. Jacob, the only student without a cell phone because his mom won't give one to him, wants one really badly.
29. Tommy, the youngest boy in 4th grade and is very smart for his age, is only seven years old.
30. Flamingos, very beautiful birds to look at because of their brightly colored feathers, get their pink color from what they eat.
31. T-shirts, one of my most favored clothing in my whole entire closet, is a comfortable top.
32. Polly, a very wealthy girl that lives in a gigantic house, is very thrifty.
33. Penguins, the birds that have black and white feathers and use them for swimming, are good swimmers.
34. Candy, the sugary and sweet-tasting treats that give joy to children AND adults, can give you cavities.
35. Ramen, a very spicy food with hot and steamy soup with chewy noodles, can give you cancer.
36. Bill, a very wealthy businessman that is very stressed with his job, is the father of Polly.
37. Eugene, a boy proned with ADD and all of his classmates think he isn't bright, is a very wise thinker.
38. Mr. Harrison, my music teacher that is hated by 80% of my classmates, can be very strict.
39. Willy, the class-clown who is also made fun of every day, is very sad.
40. Horses, the very strong and athletic animals that live in spacey fields, are known for running.
41. Cars, the motorized vehicles that can drive up to 200 miles per hour, are also known for speed and appearance.
42. Elephants, the gigantic creatures that roam in big continents that are similar to Africa, are scared of stepping on smaller animals.
43. Selena, the obese child that has just found out about the truth about obesity, started exercising one week ago.
44. Turtles, the hard-shelled animals that hide in their shells very often because of their saftey, hibernate in the winter.
45. My mom, a math tutor that can be very strict with her children and students, gives me tons of algebra homework.
46. My dad, the smartest man in the family that loves to calculate math problems and read history books, can be very silly sometimes.
47. Teddy, my 1st dog that twirls around when he is happy, is a Yorkshire Terrier.
48. Whiskers, a very mean cat that used to my my grandmother's cat, was de-clawed.
49. Magellan, a very famous explorer with the first crew to circumnavigate the entire world, died in the middle of the journey.
50. Uncle Bruce, the teacher of class 102 that told us the vocabulitis motto, "Redundancy and Over study", made his students write 50 appositive sentences for homework.