101 David Kwon

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Active/Passive

A) I kicked Joe.

P) Joe was kicked by me.

If you have A or P, choose A!


4. ending is unnecessary part.
this=collapsing of economy?
there is no particular word for "this"
"this was" is not required.

6. pretty much all done.

7. fieldwork is not a place.
so it is not "where"
they=should be correctly used.

10. connection
E) has right connection

11. In SAT "Because" is always good choice.

12. they is plural

13. came => is (x)

16. one => you (x)

17. Parallelism : has to => enters (x)

19. Three people there.
has continued => have continued

21. surely-tricky

22. creative artists

23. the announcement => was calculated.

26. preoccupation of

29. Contrasting with => Comparing with




1. I still love sally who just came from France, even though she wrote me a letter about abhoring me.

Sally who merely came from Paris, the city of fasion, is still loved by me, although her hatred against me was absolutely palpable.



2. Suddenly, I ate Sushi that was made of rotten shrimp from the Chinese market.

Sushi that was suddenly eaten by me was absolutely horrible because cook used freaking rotten shrimps.

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5/21/09

1. Not just Canada = Parallelism
Should put "in"

6. reasons is always wrong. eliminate A,D
B,E don't make sense so answer is C.

7. No error

9. George is a person = dangling problem solved.
Need to find better word. E is the best.

11. Too hard. It's not even a writing question
Just Pass.

16. Difficult for not Native speaker.
you are the one of kind.
one of that kind. one of its kind.




Drinking a Coca-cola, the sofa was wet by a man.

Drinking a Coca-cola, a man wet his nice sofa.


Kicking his young daughter, flower jar was broken by the father at the same time.

Kicking his young daughter, the father broke flower jar.


Jumping over the fence, the keys fell off from me.

Jumping over the fence, I dropped my keys.


Screaming with horrible pain, a table is just hit by me.

Screaming with horrible pain, I just hit my table.


Singing wih the great voice, Mic is responded quite lovely by Freddie Mercury.

Singing with the great voice, Freddie Mercury is a quite lovely vocalist.

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5/28/09



1.

Best anwser is "Having come this far, the delegates" because it is already done.


Already reached the form.

Because I ate breakfast, I am full. => Having eaten breakfast I am already full.

It is done? or Not.


2.

subordinary clause.

If ~ subject after it. as if = good words.

"if they had marched"

Do Not use "Would" on "IF".


6.

, + for = because


8.

Stay away from choices that has "Being"


16.

How preserving => How to preserve


18.

Balance is critical.


26.

The number => accentuate (X) <= accentuates (O)






My mother would have had a huge party if I had gotten the SAT score of 2000 or above.


Jesus Christ would not have died if he had told Jews that he is the son of the heavenly God.

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Even though Seungjae produces a lot of Ultralisks, I can play StarCraft better than he because I know how to control marines like Im, Yo Hwan.

The world's biggest pizza that tasted like a rotten fish was worse than my mother's

Tim who graduated from M.I.T