Post by Amy Kim on Jul 15, 2010 14:58:26 GMT -8
7/13/10
I got a laptop albeit, a hand me down.
My sister got more valentines albeit, candy.
My friend got better grades then me albeit, by one grade.
I got a new dog albeit, an old dog.
I have a lot of coins in my piggy bank albeit, $5.
I see myself as a Computer Forensics Expert. Helping the good guys catch the bad guys, that sort of thing. But I don't want to be in any danger which is why I'm processing the evidence and letting the police handle the danger. I want to be able to hack, protect, and obtain impossible kinds of information. It'd also be nice to be on top of technology since that is where everything is headed. I'd also use it as a safety device to track my future children and husband. My wish is to be part of NSA. Now that'd be awesome.
de - down
ject - thrown
albeit - although it's only...
7/9/10
Mea Culpa. I could have done it if I had not completely forgotten. I would of have done it yesterday night, but realized I had to go to Tae Kwon Do. I have time Saturday afternoon and will do the next SAT test at that time.
GOOD. LET'S NOT FORGET THIS TIME.
7/8/10
I guess if a viewer, especially a gullible viewer, were to watch demoraling television enough, they would begin to believe that losing any social virtue is actually fun. They may want to go out and try it, but it is like smoking or drugs. Once you do it once, you want to do it over and over again and eventaully get sucked into the life of libertinism.
VERY GOOD. IT SOUNDS VERY THOUGHTFUL BECAUSE YOU ARE BEING SPECIFIC IN IDENTIFYING THE GROUPS OF PEOPLE.
We are a very anthropocentric species, because we are on top of our food chain and such. But we sometimes go overboard and think we really are the best at everything vs. anything; including other species. And thus, since we are a very diurnal species, we think anything noctural is wrong.
GOOD.
I can tell that this society has a more seperate view when it comes to men and women which is why they feel the need to seperate the unemployed women into an entirely different class. One of the other four classes may be the same but for the men only.
OK, BUT NOT ENOUGH INFERENCE OF WHAT THE OTHER FOUR CLASSES MIGHT BE.
Men's reputations began to rely heavily on their occupation, as it defined them as who they are by what they do every single day. Women on the other hand were not really given this chance as it seemed strange if their work did not include a man in any way.
GOOD START. YOU WOULD WANT TO EXPLAIN WHY THIS WOULD BE THE CASE.
I have been thinking optimistically about my homework. I've been doing a lot of my homework and only have a few assignments left. I have been getting lazy. I still have to do my SAT test. Next week, I will be planning on doing everything by the end of Wednsday because in two weeks, I will have double the amount of work to do and cannot afford to fall behind. So I will do all my homework and on time! (Or at least try.)
VERY NICE. EXACTLY THE TYPE OF SPECIFIC AFFIRMATIONS I WANTED.
Aristrocrats didnt really have any societal strictures because they were more fortunate to have money and influence that exempted them from the more menial work. The men did nothing but white-collar work and the women didn't do any domestic work. including raising their own children.
ACTUALLY, MOST OF THE ARISTOCRATS LIVED OFF OF FAMILY MONEY, AND DID NOT HAVE TO WORK AT ALL.
I got a laptop albeit, a hand me down.
My sister got more valentines albeit, candy.
My friend got better grades then me albeit, by one grade.
I got a new dog albeit, an old dog.
I have a lot of coins in my piggy bank albeit, $5.
I see myself as a Computer Forensics Expert. Helping the good guys catch the bad guys, that sort of thing. But I don't want to be in any danger which is why I'm processing the evidence and letting the police handle the danger. I want to be able to hack, protect, and obtain impossible kinds of information. It'd also be nice to be on top of technology since that is where everything is headed. I'd also use it as a safety device to track my future children and husband. My wish is to be part of NSA. Now that'd be awesome.
de - down
ject - thrown
albeit - although it's only...
7/9/10
Mea Culpa. I could have done it if I had not completely forgotten. I would of have done it yesterday night, but realized I had to go to Tae Kwon Do. I have time Saturday afternoon and will do the next SAT test at that time.
GOOD. LET'S NOT FORGET THIS TIME.
7/8/10
I guess if a viewer, especially a gullible viewer, were to watch demoraling television enough, they would begin to believe that losing any social virtue is actually fun. They may want to go out and try it, but it is like smoking or drugs. Once you do it once, you want to do it over and over again and eventaully get sucked into the life of libertinism.
VERY GOOD. IT SOUNDS VERY THOUGHTFUL BECAUSE YOU ARE BEING SPECIFIC IN IDENTIFYING THE GROUPS OF PEOPLE.
We are a very anthropocentric species, because we are on top of our food chain and such. But we sometimes go overboard and think we really are the best at everything vs. anything; including other species. And thus, since we are a very diurnal species, we think anything noctural is wrong.
GOOD.
I can tell that this society has a more seperate view when it comes to men and women which is why they feel the need to seperate the unemployed women into an entirely different class. One of the other four classes may be the same but for the men only.
OK, BUT NOT ENOUGH INFERENCE OF WHAT THE OTHER FOUR CLASSES MIGHT BE.
Men's reputations began to rely heavily on their occupation, as it defined them as who they are by what they do every single day. Women on the other hand were not really given this chance as it seemed strange if their work did not include a man in any way.
GOOD START. YOU WOULD WANT TO EXPLAIN WHY THIS WOULD BE THE CASE.
I have been thinking optimistically about my homework. I've been doing a lot of my homework and only have a few assignments left. I have been getting lazy. I still have to do my SAT test. Next week, I will be planning on doing everything by the end of Wednsday because in two weeks, I will have double the amount of work to do and cannot afford to fall behind. So I will do all my homework and on time! (Or at least try.)
VERY NICE. EXACTLY THE TYPE OF SPECIFIC AFFIRMATIONS I WANTED.
Aristrocrats didnt really have any societal strictures because they were more fortunate to have money and influence that exempted them from the more menial work. The men did nothing but white-collar work and the women didn't do any domestic work. including raising their own children.
ACTUALLY, MOST OF THE ARISTOCRATS LIVED OFF OF FAMILY MONEY, AND DID NOT HAVE TO WORK AT ALL.