Post by vocabulitis5 on May 15, 2009 13:23:27 GMT -8
2.
((participle phrase))
It begins with verb
-ex) Burdened with three pieces of luggage and a pair of skis, .......
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active / passive
ex) I kicked Joe = Joe was kicked by me.
Between active and passive//
you should pick active(<- better)
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4.
This main sentence is middle of other sentences..
last one is unnessary
If there is main sentence last one will be anything
6.
we need "conjunction"
it = bamstorming
7.
change "fieldwork" to "field work"
antecedent
10.
we need ", and" ", but" ", or" ";"
(run-on / complex)
After ";", it must have a complete sentence.
11.
"With billions of tons yet to be mined" -> propositional phrase
"in billions of tons": not good in this sentence
In SAT, ""because"" is a good choice
12.
"and they had been" -> which had been
13.
look at "tense"
It is different
14.
plural
It is no" a writer"
writers is the answer.
17.
parallelism
19.
"writings" refers to "has"
"which" can be between singular and plural
20.
rise-rose-risen
arise-arose-arisen
21.
"Surely" is correct
It is past tense so
"will"->"would"
22.
appositive (an observer of chisese elementary education)
Plural ....again...
24.
"clever"->"cleverly"
25.
"as~as"
26.
"effects" is subject
28.
"preocupation" means busy with something so stop bothering
29.
change
"By contrast" or " In contrast to ~"
35.
you need to find the theme of this passage
(A) is not
(B) is talking about restrictions
so it is not.
(C) is taling about the media
so it is not
(D) is not
(E) is taling about negative aspects
so it is an answer
30.
<that are arising ~.....~campaigns.>
Delete "that are arising"
34.
"lies"- "they"
no subject verb phrase after comma.
(B) Delete "it"
(2 active)
My friend pushed me by force in the school two days ago.
-I was pushed by my friend by force in the school two days ago.
I caught his dog slowly with my bag during the lunch time.
-My dog was caught by me slowys with my bag during the lunch time.
((participle phrase))
It begins with verb
-ex) Burdened with three pieces of luggage and a pair of skis, .......
____________________________________
active / passive
ex) I kicked Joe = Joe was kicked by me.
Between active and passive//
you should pick active(<- better)
____________________________________
4.
This main sentence is middle of other sentences..
last one is unnessary
If there is main sentence last one will be anything
6.
we need "conjunction"
it = bamstorming
7.
change "fieldwork" to "field work"
antecedent
10.
we need ", and" ", but" ", or" ";"
(run-on / complex)
After ";", it must have a complete sentence.
11.
"With billions of tons yet to be mined" -> propositional phrase
"in billions of tons": not good in this sentence
In SAT, ""because"" is a good choice
12.
"and they had been" -> which had been
13.
look at "tense"
It is different
14.
plural
It is no" a writer"
writers is the answer.
17.
parallelism
19.
"writings" refers to "has"
"which" can be between singular and plural
20.
rise-rose-risen
arise-arose-arisen
21.
"Surely" is correct
It is past tense so
"will"->"would"
22.
appositive (an observer of chisese elementary education)
Plural ....again...
24.
"clever"->"cleverly"
25.
"as~as"
26.
"effects" is subject
28.
"preocupation" means busy with something so stop bothering
29.
change
"By contrast" or " In contrast to ~"
35.
you need to find the theme of this passage
(A) is not
(B) is talking about restrictions
so it is not.
(C) is taling about the media
so it is not
(D) is not
(E) is taling about negative aspects
so it is an answer
30.
<that are arising ~.....~campaigns.>
Delete "that are arising"
34.
"lies"- "they"
no subject verb phrase after comma.
(B) Delete "it"
(2 active)
My friend pushed me by force in the school two days ago.
-I was pushed by my friend by force in the school two days ago.
I caught his dog slowly with my bag during the lunch time.
-My dog was caught by me slowys with my bag during the lunch time.