Post by kaslyn Jang on May 21, 2009 18:07:19 GMT -8
1.comparison
those(museum in canada
2.comma splite
period or semicolon
3.sounds like hometown is world news
does- matched
4.pronoun
antecedent they-potatoes or barrels
it- being blocked or highway
passive is barely an answer.
6.reasons-are
they-student
reason is that (0)
reason is because is wrong always!
prepositional things do not give second thing, they are just describing the first one.
8.dangling participle
dangling modifier
(driving too fast,)car spun off the highway.
participle
was the car driving fast???NO!!
b)having -it
no!!!
c)has a Margo so it is clear!(no dangling)
seems-seemed
d) run-on sentence
e)GOOD
9) b)humor
d)no double and
parallism
BECAUSE is a good one!!!
11.
12.past tense
13.that is a contract not the hostpital
14 either or
15 invaluable means very valuable
16.one of a kind- unique
the one of that(its) kind
18 was absent
had done did do
19. no error
21.appositive- when you read a noun or subject, explain what it is.
by him
22.comparison parallism
to explain
24.complex/compound(but w/ a comma)
25. preoccupation with
27. clinics-s
28. tables-plural
29. changing constantly
dangling
sleeping well, his blanket kicked baby several times.
sleeping well, baby kicked his blanket several times.
incorrect-writing an essay, a teacher's recommandation fixed a student's some errors
correct- writing an essay,a student fixed some errors according to a teacher's recommandation.
correct-smocking a cigarette, a man stood next to the door. [which is the correct and incorrect? keep them in same order]
incorrect-smocking a cigarette, the door was there next to a man.
those(museum in canada
2.comma splite
period or semicolon
3.sounds like hometown is world news
does- matched
4.pronoun
antecedent they-potatoes or barrels
it- being blocked or highway
passive is barely an answer.
6.reasons-are
they-student
reason is that (0)
reason is because is wrong always!
prepositional things do not give second thing, they are just describing the first one.
8.dangling participle
dangling modifier
(driving too fast,)car spun off the highway.
participle
was the car driving fast???NO!!
b)having -it
no!!!
c)has a Margo so it is clear!(no dangling)
seems-seemed
d) run-on sentence
e)GOOD
9) b)humor
d)no double and
parallism
BECAUSE is a good one!!!
11.
12.past tense
13.that is a contract not the hostpital
14 either or
15 invaluable means very valuable
16.one of a kind- unique
the one of that(its) kind
18 was absent
had done did do
19. no error
21.appositive- when you read a noun or subject, explain what it is.
by him
22.comparison parallism
to explain
24.complex/compound(but w/ a comma)
25. preoccupation with
27. clinics-s
28. tables-plural
29. changing constantly
dangling
sleeping well, his blanket kicked baby several times.
sleeping well, baby kicked his blanket several times.
incorrect-writing an essay, a teacher's recommandation fixed a student's some errors
correct- writing an essay,a student fixed some errors according to a teacher's recommandation.
correct-smocking a cigarette, a man stood next to the door. [which is the correct and incorrect? keep them in same order]
incorrect-smocking a cigarette, the door was there next to a man.